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Post by Syxx Gibbler on Oct 15, 2018 3:30:21 GMT
Overall Ranking of the Show
What can be improved upon?
Match of the Night?
Segment of the Night?
Wrestler of the Night?
Best Feud?
Favorite Spot?
Who do you want to see more of?
Funniest Moment?
What are you excited for?
Other comments or concerns?
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Post by azurinevebbins on Oct 15, 2018 15:59:46 GMT
Overall Ranking of the Show : A - (Since there's always room for improvement, but it was well-written and posted ahead of schedule.)
What can be improved upon: I know there's something but the company's still relatively new so I'm going to need a few more episodes first.
Match of the Night: The Main Event for the Epic Championship between Mad Maxx and Hannah Kristiansen. Even though I was cheering for Kristiansen to win, both women displayed an amazing array and acumen of wrestling psychology. Abattage is incredibly foreboding.
Segment of the Night: Blake Belladonna segment since it showcased how devious and almost sociopathic Syxx Gibbler's character is. It also developed Blake as someone who wants to be viewed as a three-dimensional fighter even if management can only see one-dimension. Also, there was foreshadowing to a match that happened later on.
Wrestler of the Night: Space Lord. He was valiant even though he was vanquished by Gojira and the Zaibatsu. Showed his tenacity that it took so many people to bring him down and knock him out. Am hoping this leads to a Space Lord/Gojira program.
Best Feud: Roxy Karlsson/Webb Constanine since there seems to be a mysterious major issue that needs resolution. Plus, they deserved recognition somewhere in the feedback.
Favorite Spot: Going to be a slight mark and say when Azurine and Amedea hugged because it felt like a genuine/bittersweet moment.
Who do you want to see more of: Apart from the obvious, I'd just say to make sure everyone continues getting featured. We have a vibrant, diverse roster of characters here.
Funniest Moment: Considering it fit so well with the character, my vote goes for Gabrielle saying "You want to make me tap ...well, I want to make you cum." There might be funny moments, but that one seemed like the best blend of comment and character.
What are you excited for: Episode 3 and beyond. The commentary between Hanson and Orion was very on-point and had me chuckling quite a lot. They have a kinetic dynamic. I'm also curious when/if Syxx Gibbler might get a Twitter account to respond to her critics. Of course, that part probably fits better under "Other comments or concerns."
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Post by Maxx on Oct 15, 2018 22:28:45 GMT
As always, I applaud your flair for the dramatic and suspenseful. These shows are quite worth the read. I like the graphical flourishes - the crowd signs off the top, and having each announcer and sp4eaker given their own little icon. I like touches like that. I wish it wasn't center justified, but that's a nit-pick :-P. As for actual feedback: Overall Ranking of the Show: A -
(Center justified text irks me. :-P)
These shows are quality reads, though. Engaging content. In a fed with a lot of moving partts, you're giving the moving parts things to keep invested in. I like all of it, actually. Quite like the suspense of these shows, and keeping me guessing in terms of plot. You're doing a good job building these characters, as well!
What can be improved upon?
Perhaps more foreknowledge for others as to what matches will be happening on the day of? I like the surprise, personally, but it might helpful for twitter folks...? Or RP?
Match of the Night?
Main event, I jealously, say, but... Azurine versus Amedao was a classic, and I feel so bad for Azzy and wanna see what happens there!
Segment of the Night?
Roxi and Webb. I like Webb's millenial uppity-ness :-)
Wrestler of the Night?
Probably Hannah Kristiansen! Great showing. Easily dispelled Harry Hansen and those naysayerswho would claim she didn't deserve that main event. I think that was a wonderful showcase.
Best Feud?
Gabrielle/Eliza.
Favorite Spot?
I think the Maxx/Hannah match was good for spots.
Who do you want to see more of?
Space Lord. Webb. The Zaibatusu. I forget Harsh Millenium's character name ,but I liked him,.
Funniest Moment?
I can't overstate how I enjoy the Webb character. Texting instead of talking. That amuses me.
What are you excited for?
Abattage/Maxx. Seeing what happens with Azzy and Amedao. Will Webb upgrade to iPhone? The Tag Team chaos on the rise!!!
Other comments or concerns? My feedback may not have been comprehensive. My apologies!
Keep being awesome. I'll message you in the coming days about an idea I have. Yay. W00t! Good stuff :-).
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Post by Deleted on Oct 16, 2018 3:36:30 GMT
Memory's a bit foggy now seeing as I did my listen-through of the card last night before bed. So please bare with me while I try to remember everything.
Overall Ranking of the Show - 4.5 out of 5. There were a few grammatical slip-ups here and there that broke the flow ever so slightly. I'll also admit that I didn't care for the pictures above each speaker, but you typing their names in below that made everything easy to understand as I was listening along. Those speaker pics did grow on me over the course of the card though, so not a major knock there. All in all though, the card was a real fun listen. The segments were all excellent, and really conveyed the different characters quite well. Pacing was also very good, and I like how you're lining things up for the future. That goes a long way toward keeping us engaged, and isn't easy to plan much less pull off.
What can be improved upon? - It's a very minor thing, but the grammar slips. Also, while the segment between Maxx and Hannah was real good, I needed to point out that Hannah isn't the pensive type. For that matter, I don't think I've ever written a scene where she's praying. That's much more Izumi's style. Hannah more abrasive and volatile, more of an expressionist than introvert, more a doer than a thinker. As for how I might alter that scene, I could perhaps see Hannah climbing up the cliff face to find Maxx standing there by her Jeep waiting for her. Or if you want to go mystical on it, have Maxx appear out of nowhere as Hannah sits down and takes a gulp of water. Now obviously, I'm not suggesting you change it. Just figured I'd paint a picture for the future.
Match of the Night? - This has to go to the Main Event. It was an epic match for the Epic Championship, and nothing else came close in awesomeness to it. I was damn near at the edge of my seat for this match, and couldn't have asked for a better finish short of Hannah winning.
Segment of the Night? - I particularly enjoyed the Syxx Gibbler segments. Those went a long way to show just what kind of brilliant mind for stirring up drama she has. The three-way bit between her, Hayley Halsey, Samson, and Victor Baron was especially good as it put all four of them over very well.
Wrestler of the Night? - I have to give it to Mad Maxx here, because that Main Event performance was something spectacular. Honorable mentions to Abbatage for the beatdown he gave Maxx and Hannah plus all the build-up surrounding him.
Best Feud? - Maxx vs Abbatage. Seriously, that thing has me excited to see what happens next.
Favorite Spot? - I wouldn't necessarily call this one my favorite, but it generated the deepest emotion from me. That was the Rebel Revolution's beatdown of the French Mimes. I felt some legit compassion there, and that's not something easily done even in "real" wrestling these days. High praise.
Who do you want to see more of? - Samson. I'm really enjoying his gimmick. Also, I want to see more character development from the Zaibatsu. Yes, they're over as hired help, but I want to see more of who they are as individuals. Maybe that's just me though. Hannah Stanton didn't create enough carnage this go around. That's got to change.
Funniest Moment? - I honestly can't remember cracking up over anything in particular, but again my memory's a bit foggy a day removed from it. I did really enjoy the banter between Zelda and Harry though. That kept things moving right along nicely.
What are you excited for? - Maxx vs. Abbatage, the House of 1,000 Corpses match. Also I'm excited for Izumi's debut in episode 3, as well as seeing where Hannah K. goes from here.
Other comments or concerns? - I've aired my concerns, so that about covers it for me.
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Post by Abattage on Oct 30, 2018 1:01:06 GMT
Overall Ranking of the Show
I'd give it an 8 (because for me, 10 is for truly special shows and I don't like abusing it)
What can be improved upon?
Other than little things like some grammatical errors and Maxx's entrance mentioning waiting for her opponent who was already in the ring (I've done that by mistake, too, when copy/pasting entrances in the past), I'm not sure what else, as of yet. I'd say more segments could make use of the fairground in the surrounding area but that could be more on us to do that.
Match of the Night?
Main event but the tandem match was a very close second.
Segment of the Night?
Anything involving Syxx but damn, the one where she berated Belladonna was harsh.
Wrestler of the Night?
Maxx, with Kristiansen a close second and Samson third
Best Feud?
I still really like Gabby/Eliza, so far
Favorite Spot?
The plancha countered by a European uppercut stands out
Who do you want to see more of?
Space Lord, Hayley Halsey, Blake Belladonna, Webb Constantine
Funniest Moment?
So much to choose from as far as the commentary but I did enjoy Hanson crowbarring "benevolent" into everything after just learning the word.
What are you excited for?
Seeing where Abattage/Maxx, The Zaibatsu/Samson and Webb/Roxy lead, as well as who Stanton's got her sights set on. Plus, the tag division kicking off big time. Surely The Zaibatsu will join the fray, as well as more teams?
Other comments or concerns?
I'm curious how Amedea will react to putting her girlfriend out of a job. That and "will we have Azurine enact a sort of Veneno situation with a mask?", after the whole thing with Cortez Castro in LU last season (also, coincidence that WWU shares its initials with the Worldwide Underground? I think not). I wasn't sure I'd like the images whenever people speak but it really grew on me quickly.
Overall great show.
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